Friday, September 25, 2015

Human Nature Essay

     I like to believe people can be good but people are definitely evil. They may appear moral ,but many serious situations push us and bring out the bad inside of everyone.

     People are generally selfish. In the text the Lord of the Flies the characters are stranded on a deserted island and they have to survive. Most of them are just trying to live, but a big concern for them is the dispute between Ralph's group and Jack's group over who gets power over them all. In the poem The Cold Within none of the six characters would give their stick to the fire whether there reason be because of social indifference, race and even religion. If they would have given up heir sticks they might have survived.

     People are relentless. Jack would stop at nothing to gain power over everyone and everything in the LOTF by using his threats and lies about a beast that apparently roamed the island and in the gained control over the other boys (all except Ralph). In The Cold Within the rich man would not give up his stick because of the social status he and the poor man shared.

     People are narcissistic. Jack thought every thing he did was right and that everybody should follow his commands. Roger was also kind of narcissistic because he wanted everyone to be evil like him and do terrible things.

     People are controlling. Roger and jack used each other for their own personal gain in LOTF. Jack used Roger to convince people to join him and Roger used jack to create total chaos for everyone.

     Everyone has an bit of evil inside of them whether it as big as Roger's or Piggy's(whom was killed by Roger). People are selfish, relentless, inconsiderate and controlling even though a lot hate to admit it. you may meet some one who seems like a good person, but they really are just better at hiding their dark side than everyone else.

4 comments:

  1. Some of the spelling needs to be corrected. I really enjoyed the ending, that was one of my favorite parts in the essay. You gave really nice examples to back up your statements. Overall, the essay was really well done.

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  2. The essay was pretty good. There are some grammer mistakes and I feel as if some things you talked about in the essay could've been elaborated on as well, but you did have very good text examples and evidence. The intro somewhat grabbed my attention as well. Everything considered it was still a good essay.

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  3. Good job with topic sentences and organization of similar thoughts. I like that it was clear what reason I would be hearing about before you gave support. Your support for your reasons could have been elaborated on though. Good use of higher level vocabulary words. Grade: 85%

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